viernes, 24 de octubre de 2014

Sabrina, the miracle

We were asked to write a story about any topic. But we should finish our storys with the phrase "that was the last time they ever saw them". We made drafts and correct our mistakes. This is my result:

Sabrina, the miracle

There was a boy who was called Patrick. He didn't have many friends, he was very intelligent and he did very well at school. He wasn't the kind of boys girls fall in love with. His face was probably the ugliest from the school. This wasn't easy for him. There was also a group of boys who always bothered Patrick. They bothered him just because he was the weakest person, probably in the world. Every afternoon finishing classes there was a horrible moment for Patrick. This situation made Patrick's parents worry. He always arrived home with terrible bruises. The bullies were every day stronger and bigger. A morning before going to school, Patrick's mother found his son crying on his bed. "Why are you crying baby?" She asked. "I'm sick and tired bullies kick me every single day just because I'm not like the others, I can't handle this anymore!" Patrick replied. His mother went out from the room and called the school on the phone. They never aswered, it wasn't an organized school. His mother made the decision Patrick won't go to school that day. The next morning, Patrick woke up and went to school. When he arrived at the classroom he saw a new face... It was a new classmate! She was a girl and her name was Sabrina. Patrick and Sabrina shared homework and had a lot of talking together that day. They had a lot in common. The class had finished and it was time to go home. The bullies kicked Patrick as always, this time Sabrina was watching from the back of a tree. The next day in class Sabrina told Patrick "Why did you let those stupid boys kick you yesterday?" "They are better than me, I can't do anything." Patrick answered sadly." Maybe I can..." Sabrina said and went to her desk to keep on working. That afternoon the bullies looked for Patrick like every day. But this time he wasn't alone, he was with Sabrina. The bullies didn't even care. When they were about to kick Patrick... Sabrina jumped over the bullies and hit his entire body with her small hands. Even though Sabrina was a girl she knew how to defend herself and her friends. Patrick was shocked, his eyes couldn't believe what was happening. The next of the week Sabrina returned home with Patrick after school. The bullies after the conflict didn't appear in places Patrick and Sabrina were. That was the last time they ever saw them.